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I WASTED AN HOUR WRITING THE DESCRIPTION AND GOOGLE CHROME CRASHED SO IT'S ALL GONE. AND THIS DESCRIPTION IS NOT AS GOOD AS IT WAS...

Everyone's critiques inspired me to improve my art. People said that my shading is too blurry so I should try shading with the pen/pencil tool instead of using the airbrush or blur. I tried and failed. Well, not everything looks that bad, but the hair is HORRIBLE. (The skirt is bad but not as bad as the hair). I tried shading the hair more than 10 times because it was always wrong and I had to erase everything again and again. So I just gave up and it remained horrible. So which is better, this horrible style or the old awful and blurry style? Tbh I liked my blurry style more, at least the hair looked better.  Now I don't feel like drawing at all but I have to finish my art trade with TotallyInsaneAtTheMo and I wanted to draw something for Agent064Pixels's birthday on Valentines Day, I don't even know what I will do if I can't draw anything because I am unmotivated. 
And please critique my art because I want to improve....

This is Mary Sue by the way. She is the personification of all Mary Sues. I haven't invented much about her yet but I will make a short bio ^^ (She isn't supposed to offend anyone, she is just a comedic Mary Sue and people are supposed to laugh at her xDD Mary Sues make me laugh because they are so stupid lol)  And thank you everyone for the suggestions!! <33

Name: Princess Mary Sue Sakura Dark'ness
Age: 10,000,000 or more but looks like 20. And she is immortal.
Hair color: Anything. She can change her hair to whatever colors she wants. (It's red, pink, purple and blue in this picture)
Eye color: She can change it to whatever she wants but her eyes are two different colors. (On this picture the left one is purple and the right one is red)
Species: All kinds of magical creatures (too many to list here, but basically anything you can think of), angel, demon (also dream demon like the triangle from Gravity Falls), God, alien and human.
Nationality: TBA (Idk what it should be, suggestions would be helpful) (^w^)
'Good' things about her (virtues or idk what it's called): Beauty, strength, big Ukraine breast size, magical powers, she is rich, I will add more.
Flaws: none
Occupation: To steal everyone's husbandos, control everyone, and rule the whole world
(And I did the Mary Sue test for her: {link})

Random facts about her:

- She steals everyone's husbando and makes them love her with some sort of magic
- She has a twin brother named Gary Stu, Larry Stu or Marty Stu
- She has all sorts of magical powers and telekinesis.
- She is possessed by a demon and an angel
- She is VERY strong and she can defeat anyone
- She hates all the Hetalia girls because she is jealous of them
- She claims to be cuter than Liechtenstein and she is very jealous of Liechtenstein's cuteness 
- She is also jealous of Switzerland and claims that he is her Brother
- She is jealous of Belgium's waffles
- She is jealous of Hungary's frying pan
- She is jealous of Ukraine's breasts even though her breasts are big too xD
- She is jealous of all the Nyo!s too and hates them as well
- She approves of this group: :iconi-hate-seychelles:
- She likes wearing showy (sexy) outfits
- She is from a very rich royal family, and she is a princess
- She is the most beautiful person in the whole world
- She gets along with EVERY Hetalia character, even the 2p!s (actually she uses her magic to make them obey her)
- Her (adoptive) parents are dead
- Actually she is the only person on the whole world who is of mixed species like this
- And she was't born. She was created by magic. So she doesn't have parents.
- She can make her hair glow while singing (just like Rapunzel in Tangled)
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She has angel wings and demon horns but she can make them disappear
- She can turn into a mermaid if she wants to when she touches water
- She can turn into a werewolf
- She has vampire fangs but she can hide them
- She can walk through walls and become invisible
- She can travel through time and dimensions
- She is good at everything. She can sing well, she can draw well, she is very intelligent etc.
- In the Gakuen, Yandere Simulator and any other school AUs, she is the very intelligent and popular top-of-the-class bully student and every teacher likes her.
- She can see magical creatures and control them
- She has mind reading powers
- She can't handle criticism of herself. She punishes anyone who says that she should be kinder.
I will add more later

Characters that are similar to her: Chloe (from Miraculous Ladybug), Ebony Dark'ness Dementia Raven Way (from My Immortal, the ultimate Mary Sue fanfiction), the girl from Melanie Martinez's Pacify Her, Lorelei (from Marvel), the Mary Sue from here, any other Mary Sue like characters from anything and most importantly all Hetalia Mary Sues. 

//Current job - She wants to steal Romano from Agent064Pixels and Romania from me. But Romixels will live on because even though Mary Sue is VERY strong, our love for Romixels is stronger. RomaLina is dead because of her though ;;w;;  If you have a crush on a Hetalia boy, beware because she is after your husbando and she will try to steal him from you (◎◡◎)  Don't worry, your ships WON'T be defeated because Mary Sue is horrible and we can defeat her xDD


I forgot too many things.... and I am so sorry if this offended anyone. It's meant to make people laugh because Mary Sue is so stupid and hilarious xD

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